Many great people have explored and discovered new things like land and knowledge. Some way people were able to explore the unknown where by sailing the sea. This was very common in the old ages. People also explored by horses and train and by foot. When technology started to get more advanced people traveled by cars and by plains.
Some people have devoted themselves to a life of discovery because of the trill and excitement they get out of it. Different people explore for different reasons. Some explore to gain knowledge and understanding about the world around them. Some want to explore and discover new things.
People that want to live the life of adventure and discovery have to sacrifice a lot. They have to sacrifice a lot of time to be able to go on voyages. Explorers and pioneers also have to sacrifice a family life. The voyages they also experience usually are costly.
Thalia, good job on this post. You have really been developing your own voice. Keep it up. I would like you to watch out for repetitive thoughts though. You say, "Some explore to gain knowledge and understanding about the world around them. Some want to explore and discover new things," which is really the same thing. Also, the first paragraph focuses on ways people travel, which is not part of the assignment.
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